Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Hamburgers!!!

I snatched one of the fresh buns out of the packet. I tore it in half and first splattered the delicious sauce all over the top and bottom. 

I love this peace of writing because of the description in some of the words and how all of the writing fits together perfectly.

I could work on making it not to over descriptive.
Bye,bye. :)
 

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